lunes, 29 de agosto de 2016

Poetry, poetry and more poetry

In class we read some poems that ended giving us some ideas for poems. This is mine:

Irresolute feeling

Love is as sweet as a breeze in summer
umpredictable and hard to discover
Love is a feeling that will make you smile, cry and laugh
when you finally find it you cannot live wihout your other half.

Sometimes it will hurt like a knife in your chest,
occasionally you will feel joy in your breast
and maybe you will finally feel messed
no one knows if at the end you'll feel stressed
nevertheless it feels like a never ending test.

Love is incredible, curious and delicate
it can be as warm as summer or as cold as winter
your heart is fragil, in times it will break like a glass
however it will regenerate as time.

Love is like a angelical song
don't be afraid of it,
follow your spirit
and love will always help you find your way.





3 comentarios:

  1. Amazing work Dolores!
    You´ve written a wonderful poem: it is personal, expressive, it makes great use of language and vocabulary. What else is there for me to say?
    Once more, it has been a pleasure to read you. Congratulations on your creative writing skills!

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